Friday, 19 December 2008

Thursday 18th December

Metro

Article 1
Headline: 'Sacked' over sexy dress
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 9

Outline: This story is about Fata Lemes, a waitress who claims that she was sacked from her job because she refused to wear a revealing dress.

The article describes Ms Leme as "A Muslim cocktail waitress..." yet the article doesn't actually state that Ms Lemes' refusal was bacause of religious beliefs. This description of Ms Lemes are the actual opening words of the article.

Reading the story one realises that Ms Lemes thought that management at the bar "...allowed staff to be treated as prostitutes".

This shows that the main driver for Ms Lemes' refusal appears to have been
on grounds of gender i.e. the desire not to be seen as a sex object by customers at the bar. With that in mind the mention of Ms Lemes' religious beliefs actually has nothing to do with the story and only seeks to create a connection in the readers minds. A connection which doesn't exist, even in the article itself.

For highlighting Ms Lemes' faith unnecessarilly this article is marked as negative.

Article Verdict: Negative

Article 2
Headline: Betting boss loses £200m over US ban
Section: News
Written by: Miles Erwin
Page: 22

Outline: This story isn't about Islam or Muslims but I have included it as it's written by Miles Erwin for the Metro.

The story is about the boss of a gambling company falling foul of US internet gambling rules. The man in question is Anurag Dikshit.

I have previously highlighted stories involving members of minority communities and commented that in most cases where Muslims aren't involved the ethnic background of the subjects is left out as is the case with this particular story. This is how it should be however some journalists do sometimes point out that a person in a story is a Muslim when there is usually no relevance to the article.

Miles Erwin previously wrote about 2 students who received racist jokes from 118 118. In that story he referred to "A Muslim student". In that particular story it would have been more appropriate to describe the man as an Asian student because the racist jokes were targeted at the Asian Community bur Erwin chose to use the term Muslim.

It's interesting to note that Erwin fails to mention anything about the ethnic background of Mr Anurag Dikshit, he doesn't use any words like "Hindu Businessman" or "Asian millionnaire" etc.

No rating will be given to this story however Erwin's future reporting involving ethnic minorities will be closely watched to see whether he only chooses to highlight Muslim individuals in his articles.

Article Verdict: N/A

Article 3
Headline: Blinded by their beliefs?
Section: Metro Mail
Written by: Reader letters
Page: 40

Outline: On Tuesday the Metro featured a story about a blind man who was refused entry into an Indian restaurant because the owners objected to his guide dog on religious grounds.

I gave the article a negative rating as it portrayed a negative view of Muslims and here's the evidence to support that.

Feedback from the 2 readers is presented and both are negative against Islam and mention that too much has been compromised to appease religious groups.

I will repeat once again that the owners of the Indian restaurant shouldn't have treated Mr Elder-Brown the way they did but the Metro's rather short article (less than 100 words) generalised the actions of the restaurant owners leaving people thinking that perhaps all Muslims would treat blind people and their guide dogs this way.

The very short Metro article was enough to provoke a negative response from at least 2 people, who know how many more complained.

Whilst this isn't an article I've brought this up because it shows the power of media and the way they report about Muslims.

Article Verdict: N/A

Wednesday, 17 December 2008

Tuesday 16th December

Metro

Article 1
Headline: Curry ban for guide dog man
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 11

Outline: This is a very short piece, under 100 words, and is a about a blind man, Mr Alun Elder-Brown, who was refused entry into a restaurant because of his guide dog. The article states that the owners refused entry to Mr Elder-Brown because dogs "offended Islamic beliefs".

Whilst the actions of the owners were undoubtedly wrong the article does help to create a negative view of Muslims. A better way to present the news would have been to say that the "owners believed that dogs offended their religious beliefs", this is because not all Muslims would have treated Mr Elder-Brown this way.

Article Verdict: Negative

Article 2
Headline: Iraqis back 'shoe bomber'
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 13

Outline: Whilst not mentioning Muslims or Islam specifically I felt it important to include this article in the round up because of the sensationalism used in the headline.

This story is referring to the now famous shoe throwing incident at George W Bush by Muntadhar Al-Zaidi in Baghdad.

The headline makes it seem as though Mr Al-Zaidi had explosives in his shoes when this is clearly false hence the headline represents a breach of the Press Complaint Commission 's Code of Practice, Clause 1 on Accuracy.

Article Verdict: Negative

Tuesday, 16 December 2008

Monday 15th December

Metro

Article 1
Headline: 'Forced marriage' bride freed from parents' jail
Section: News
Written by: Jo Steele
Page: 7

Outline: This story is about UK based Dr Humayra Amedin, who was held against her wishes by her parents in Bangladesh for 5 months whilst they planned her forced marriage. The article mentions that she's been given permission by a court to fly back to Britain.

Jo Steele writes that the reason for her imprisonment was because her parents "wanted her to marry a fellow Muslim". This is written on line 9 as the closing sentence on the 2nd paragraph of the article.

The article goes onto state that Dr Amedin's boyfriend is Hindu and that this "angered her family..."

Whilst this article explore a very important topic, that of forced marriages, after reading it one is left with the impression that this is somehow linked to Muslims. This is particularly true given the rationale presented for Dr Amedin's imprisonment by Steele in this article.

Unfortunately forced marriages are a curse that afflicts people belonging to the 3 major faith groups of the Subcontinent, i.e. Hindus, Muslims, Sikhs. However no mention of this is made by Steele in the article and the word Muslim is specifically mentioned hence this is marked as a negative.

Article Verdict: Negative


Manchester Evening News (City Edition)

Article 1
Headline: Freed, NHS doc held by family for 'forced marriage'
Section: News
Written by: Maddison Jones
Page: 12

Outline: Like the Metro the MEN also carries this story although they refer to her as Dr Humayra Abedin rather than Amedin like the Metro.

The MEN also mentions that Dr Abedin had a Hindu boyfriend "which angered her Muslim family..." who wanted "...to force her to marry a Muslim Stranger."

Like the Metro Maddison Jones also makes reference to Muslims but does so twice in her article in the 7th paragraph.

Jones also fails to mention that forced marriages are, unfortunately, common aross various faith groups in the Subcontinent and thus creates an association of forced marriages with Muslims. For this reason the article is marked as negative

Article Verdict: Negative

Article 2
Headline: It truly is the season to goodwill - for all faiths
Section: News
Written by: Neal Keeling
Page: 18

Outline: This is an article which talks about the 1st multifaith gathering in Manchester to celebrate 3 religious festivals; Christmas, Eid-ul-Adha and Chanukah.

Chairman of the Muslim-Jewish forum Councillor Afzal Khan is mentioned as well as reference to his CBE for inter-faith work.

The article is a very positive piece which shows the co-operation and coming together of the Christian, Jewish and Muslim communities in celebration and is quite prominent. Photos of representatives of each of the 3 faiths are also featured.

The article also makes reference to a speech by Hazel Blears MP who talks about the richness of society because of faith.

Article Verdict: Positive

Sunday, 30 November 2008

Friday 28th November

Metro

Article 1
Headline: Muslim and Hindu Unite
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 7

Outline: In light of the atrocities in Mumbai this news brief comments that British Hindu and Muslim groups united to condemn the attacks.

The news brief is presented in a small box at the top of the page which has a coloured background as opposed to white, which helps to give the article more prominence.

At a time when news reports often portray Islam and Muslim in a negative light this was a positive article to be featured in the Metro.

Article Verdict: Positive


Manchester Evening News (City Edition)

Article 1
Headline: Commandos kill Mumbai gunmen
Section: News
Written by: Jon Smith
Page: 5

Outline: This article is about the atrocities in Mumbai. The opening paragraph mentions that "suspected Muslim militants stormed ... across the city". This type of language is inflammatory as it implies guilt by association for anyone who happens to be Muslim. To the average reader this phrase will present a negative image of Islam and Muslims.

Article Verdict: Negative


Friday, 28 November 2008

Thursday 27th November

Metro

Article 1
Headline: Heard about the racist jokes sent by 118 188?
Section: News
Written by: Miles Erwin
Page: 11

Outline: This article is about 2 students, Kameron Abbas and Imran Shah, who used the directory service 118 188 to get jokes, only to be sent racist jokes by text.

The article starts off by saying "A Muslim student was stunned..."

Whilst there's nothing factually wrong with that statement there's absolutely no reason to mention his religious background. If anything he should have been described as an Asian student as the jokes in question were racist and derogatory towards Asian people hence a racial categorisation of Mr Abbas could have grounds for being more relevant to the article.


In summary the article will be marked as negative because there is no need to mention Mr Abbas' religious background in this article, if anything it ends up showing 'another Muslim person complaining'.

Article Verdict: Negative


Manchester Evening News (City Edition)

Article 1
Headline: MEP takes shelter from bullets in basement
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 6

Outline: This story is an account of the unfolding Mumbai terrorist attacks by Sajjad Karim, MEP, who hid in the hotel basement.

The article goes onto give a description of the events as per Mr Karim's testimony. It finishes by saying "He was the first British Muslim elected to Parliament".

The article is a factual description of events and the mention of Mr Karim as the 1st Muslim MEP could be interepreted as a positive portrayal of him.

Article Verdict: Positive

Article 2
Headline: Father cut his sons' throats then tried to burn bodies
Section: News
Written by: Sam Reeves
Page: 18

Outline: This story does not concern Muslims but instead focuses on the tragic murder of 2 innocent young children at the hands of their Father, Ashok Kalyanjee.

The reason for including this is because the murderer is an Asian man yet there is no mention of his religious background anywhere in the article, despite taking up three quarters of page 18. This is how reporting should be done so that the people are presented with facts about the story not the religious background of the person, which may lead to prejudiced opinions amongst readers against a particular group.

Quite often we see Muslim people being identified on the basis of their religion, I have reported several articles in the past where people have been identified in the article in Muslims when there is no need to do so.

There is no ranking for this article as it's not applicable however it's listed here to give readers an example of how stories about Non-Muslim Asians are reported

Article Verdict: N/A

Thursday, 27 November 2008

Wednesday 26th November

Manchester Evening News (City Edition)

Article 1
Headline: Pioneers on Mission to Kuwait - Break free of kitchen sink, Muslim women told
Section: News
Written by: ?
Page: 20

Outline: This article is about the trip of Manchester Councillor Maryam Khan and Fatima Mahmoud of the British Muslim Heritage to Kuwait at the invitation of the Government there to talk about women's rights.

The actual event itself is positive but the way its been reported is negative as the caption above the photo accompanying the article makes reference to Muslim women in some way being tied to the kitchen sink. The opening line of the article states "Two pioneering women...." this is a missed opportunity to highlight the fact that the two pioneering women are in fact Muslim pioneering women.

Quite often we see Muslims identified in situations where a negative story needs to be told, why can't the same be true when there is a positive news to report?

Article Verdict: Negative

Wednesday, 26 November 2008

Tuesday 25th November

Metro

Article 1
Headline: Barclays funding gets the nod
Section: Metro Business
Written by: ?
Page: 48

Outline: This article is about the sale of a third of Barclays Bank to investors from the Middle East. The best caption to sum up this article is "making a mountain out of a mole hill". This is because of the writer's attempt to magnify the opposition by Barclays shareholders to the deal. The words used are "More than one in ten voters...opposed or abstained from plans" so in plain english this would be written as 'more than 10%. This doesn't represent significant opposition to the plan at all but rather the fact that just under 90% approved the deal. Why then is the writer trying to paint a different picture to the readers, does he or she have an objection to a third of Barclays in the hands of Arab investors, who knows?

In summary this is an article which attempts to portray a distorted view of how the shareholders actually voted hence it's been given a negative rating.

Article Verdict: Negative


Manchester Evening News (City Edition)

Article 1
Headline: Barclays shareholders back £7bn Middle East deal
Section: Business
Written by: ?
Page: 5

Outline: This reports on the same story as the Metro however is complete contrast as it acknowledges that the proposed deal was approved by shareholders. It refers to the investors as "Abu Dhabi royalty" and mentions the fact that one of the investors, Sheikh Mansour Bin Zayed Al Nahyan is owner of Manchester City. This helps to paint the investors in a positive light as Manchester City is a popular football team with locals of Manchester.

The article also provides more detail on the percentage of shareholders in favour of the deal (80%) but also makes reference to those opposed to the deal.

Overall the article provides a balanced view of the details involved in the proposed deal and does not attempt to cast any personal opinions on the deal thus it's given a positive rating.

Article Verdict: Positive